Reviews for Wooden Swing
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Very comforting and surreal. Once again, I admire how ethereal your poems are. Your ending was one that I really liked; it seemed to be a whisper when I read it. Incredibly well done. Beautiful write.
Caitir chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
hmm... a spiritual meaning that touches something inside with a sense of peace. very nice... is "tress" supposed to be "trees"?
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
This is very pretty, I like your choice of "painting." I can picture someone taking a walk out to their wooden swing and just flying away all their worries. Very nice.
Fangelir chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Such a peaceful effect. . . perfect for the weather! I especially love the third stanza; the mention of moonlight really shows how the swing applies to all parts of the day, not just when it's sunny. :)
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Just as beautiful as your poem "the wind". Can we say... I sense a very talented poet? hehe. Good work!
Jenna xx
HideAwayFairy chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
This poem is so simple yet so beautiful. You made all this come from a swing, you make it sound like it's magical. Simply stunning. I love it!
Celestial-Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
Very nice! :)