Reviews for Wooden Swing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very comforting and surreal. Once again, I admire how ethereal your poems are. Your ending was one that I really liked; it seemed to be a whisper when I read it. Incredibly well done. Beautiful write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm... a spiritual meaning that touches something inside with a sense of peace. very nice... is "tress" supposed to be "trees"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very pretty, I like your choice of "painting." I can picture someone taking a walk out to their wooden swing and just flying away all their worries. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a peaceful effect. . . perfect for the weather! I especially love the third stanza; the mention of moonlight really shows how the swing applies to all parts of the day, not just when it's sunny. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just as beautiful as your poem "the wind". Can we say... I sense a very talented poet? hehe. Good work! Jenna xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem is so simple yet so beautiful. You made all this come from a swing, you make it sound like it's magical. Simply stunning. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! :) |