Reviews for Evil
roses on a grave chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Fiontari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
I don't know, this poem just didn't do it for me. I like how there is no cliche, but all the same, it does have the "wow" factor that your other poems do.
Teacup Majoram chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Nice. I like the fact you didn't use alot of cliches. Well done.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
nice poem
Cari-anne chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
M A very interesting point of evil. Nice imagery though I feel the hate again I have for evil after reading this poem. It really appeals to my senses.
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
No, not your best, but still great.
*shivers in delight* how wonderfully you have described evil, "Putrid slime" and "Twisted reality"... *shivers again* eeheehee!
Catella Estelle chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
Hmm, a wee bit strange but a good insight on "evil".
You have a funny arrangement of words from what I've read so far, but that's all right! Everyone needs their own style.
Great work!
Keep it up!
~ Little Dog Muse