Reviews for The Rebel Child of Rialtos'
Getuie chapter 3 . 6/1/2004
Interesting... I'm not yet sure what to make of this, but it's well written. There's a lot of thought put behind it, that much can be seen. I'm confused as to why they're so friendly towards the creature... or why it would react the way it does, but I guess all shall be revealed eventually, right? I'll keep my eye on this.
Hail the Warrior chapter 3 . 5/12/2004
Hey, this is interesting. But the three chapters seemed like they were a long chapter split up. Just my opinion.
Thanks for reviewing my stuff.
GarethNelson chapter 3 . 4/13/2004
hey, just read chapter 3 and let me say:
it's great.
my only criticism would be that you tend to repeat a lot of phrases. "unceremoniously flung" etc and you go into more detail at random parts while staying with less detail at other parts. but other then that this is beginning to look really good
GarethNelson chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
a very good opening to the story, if it wasn't for the fact i know the next part of the story i would be very interested to know what happens next. lol
keep it up, this will keep readers interested