Don't eat my face

inventive and amusing
me likey

Wow, that was pretty insane. Reminds me a lot of something that might be caught on an episode of the Twilight Zone! It very unique and I can tell you're pretty good at writing stories just from this one! You've got a lot going for you so keep it up!

::whistling the theme to the Twilight Zone::
I couldn't resist but hell this was one story that I had as much fun reading that you had as much fun writing. This is actually pretty damn good, it is funny as all hell.

WHAT!
That was WEIRD. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You are officially a member of my favorite authors list. Check out my stories "Twins" and "Silence" for some serious horror, and "Paradise" for some seriously sick humor.
Mujah