Reviews for Flight
falconstrife86 chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Short, sweet and simple. That's what sometimes makes a poem most effective. I liked this. Good job.
Dark Mage Raistlin chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Simple, and I like it even more now than when I first read it. A lovely poem.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
i like the old english you used. it makes it seem likeit would be dated 1570 or something like that. the poem gives a message that anything is possible. thats sweet that you wrote something for your brother.
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
I've been reviewing a lot of your poetry, but I really liked this one. It was short and sweet. Well, sweet as in GOOD. Lol. Sry. I'm blonde. But... I'm adding this to my favorites. I like it. Something about it just... Grabs me... There's so many ways you could look at it... It's awsome!
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
ok - I am going to guess what this poem means: I think the girl is talking about a guy she thought would always be there for her (wingless bird) but one day he left her for someone else (flit joyfully away) and she never saw it coming and is in shock.
nice poem!