Reviews for With Every Sin
Guest chapter 8 . 1/5/2020
Great chapter,but im kind of confused did they sleep with each other ?
Guest chapter 12 . 11/1/2016
I honestly love this story. Its so well written and I sincerely wish that you would finish it. Its the first interracial story I've read and I think its absolutely brilliant.
Yongosi Rita chapter 12 . 8/10/2016
What happened to Nathaniel's frd d one that was interest in her , who was moslested her, who followed her to Nathan's saying I would like to knw what happened between them anyway nice story
love2read chapter 12 . 7/4/2016
You are really good with words. I hope you look into writing and publishing your work.
Thank you for sharing this story with us and giving us, your reader, closer with the this story. This story was beautifully executed.
S.A chapter 12 . 5/21/2016
Okay, first of all this is an incredible story, I absolutely love it! Sadie is awesome, but ugh! Is this really how you're going to end it? At first I thought this was complete because of how the story progressed, but I expected him to do one of three things; either come back and live the rest of his pitiful existence with his surly wife, come back and fight for his forbidden love with Sadie and somehow finally achieve the happiness they both deserve (not to mention calling Ann out on her non-virginity), or just die in the war. Yet none of these happened and it stayed somewhat inconclusive, like what about Jacob? How come her husband doesn't mention his obvious resemblance to someone they all know? And is Nat gonna survive/ ever come back? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
25435345gb chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
What an excellent chapter to begin a story. Vibrant portrayal of childhood friendship, and I'm pulled in already.
kriss chapter 12 . 8/7/2015
I wanna cry this story is so good
20thCenturyGuest chapter 12 . 10/10/2014
Oh please continue! This is so sorrowfully good! I can't get enough! Please UPDATE ASAP!
Amazing job hun! :-D :-D :-D
20thCenturyGuest chapter 11 . 10/10/2014
Awe man, the next one is the last one until you update... Please, please update this!
This is such an amazing story that it MUST be continued! #LovingThis :-D
20thCenturyGuest chapter 9 . 10/10/2014
This is so sad. They're are hopelessly in love, but the time era works against them. Frown.
Love this so much. You mimic the civil war time era very well. Writing stories set in the 19th century can be a challenging task to fulfill but you tackled like a pro. Amazing job, hun! :-D
20thCenturyGuest chapter 8 . 10/10/2014
This was so sweet. Loved, loved so much!
20thCenturyGuest chapter 7 . 10/10/2014
This is getting so deliciously good! I love! :-D
Please continue this!
20thCenturyGuest chapter 6 . 10/10/2014
Loved so much!
20thCenturyGuest chapter 5 . 10/10/2014
Oh goodness. Loved so much! Eeek! :-D
20thCenturyGuest chapter 4 . 10/10/2014
Lovedddddd! :-D
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