Reviews for Rain Dance
Eirien chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
Beautiful. I love the parallel between the nature event of a rainstorm and the girl's feelings, the ways she abandons herself to the rain in the end. Your imagery is great, such as the comparison of the light drizzle with kisses. Lovely little piece this.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
sounds like you... no duh, you wrote it... sounds like me too. the rain is good. mucho grandes good. i like. i like the poem thing (is it a poem?) too.
very good work at describing the essence of a rainstorm.
Getuie chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
*smiles at the imagery* THIS I loved. I love the way you used some words... or phrases more, I guess... Like 'the clouds made promises that they had broken all summer' and 'let the storm become her'... I loved the personification... I'm adding this to my profile.
Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
This is a charming piece, nicely described. I think you should keep it a vignette - some of its appeal derives from its lack of context, allowing the details (such as the fact that she is dressed for a party) to be revealed along the way.