|Reviews for I Am|
| Randirogue chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I like this very much. There is a easy flow in which you direct the reader through the precise, exacting train of thought in order to persuade them to the conclusion at the end. Very well structured, worded, and rhythmed.
| Crimson Arranz chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
hello, it's me! lol, yes, me, cinnamon angel, the weirdo you're talking with right now.
this is great. i like it. the last paragraph makes it a whole, it's awesome...
hope you will write more.
ok, coming back to convo
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
This is gorgeous. I don't share the "child of God" minset, but I've never thought differing opinions matter when it comes to good poetry. (I especially like the last line). The way it is set up and the vocabulary just give me an ethereal feeling. Nice work, insightful. I'm putting this on my faves.
| ubercognito chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
I like the rhythm of this poem. Religion seems terribly unpopular these days - sometimes I get irritated with religions oppressing rights of people - but in general, I think religion is a good and beautiful thing. The last stanza is quite beautiful.