Reviews for Five Years
Pretty Peaceful chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
oh thats beaitful. did it really take you 5 years to write this? its really beaitful.
Chi Ame chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Only five years? Crap man, that's TALENT! That would have taken me a couple lifetimes! Anyway, great poem, keep it up.
Forest Passant chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Wow. That was cool.
Jane Mullane chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Helluin chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Thats good. I like your work. Keep it up!
p.s. you can read mine if you want to:)
Lynnie-Pooh chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
5 words: short, sweet, to the point.
RurouniMarion chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
*whistles* wow. that was good. *whining: how come I can't write that well? huh? huh?
5 years? wow, you must have been thinking about this poem for a while. like i said, it's awesome.
Rupert Greenwich chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
It took you five years? That's deep, man. Crazy stuff.
Feng the Tears of a Phoenix chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I can relate, but I bet you don't think I can. I just hope you aren't actually going to hurt yourself in anyway. It's not worth it. You're talented and this poem really shows that. It's beautiful...
KnittedQuilt chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
A very touching poem. I think a lot of people out there will regocnise the message you are sending and relate to it. :)
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
This was really good! It would be cool if you made this into a longer poem as well, with this bit as the last verse. Keep up the good work! :)