|Reviews for Future|
| pointythings chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I like this one. The lining is more conventional than in some of your work, and I think it works in this case. I like some of the metaphors and detailing. I particularly like 'I offered myself the sunset.' Very nice. Yours in writing,~pointythings~
| D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
This was one of the last pieces that you wrote before graduating. I understand it knowing that that is what its contents are about. But I do have to say, that your work got 100% better after this point.D.
| Sterces chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
*claps* Yay! Good poem! I enjoyed reading it!