Reviews for A Poem To My FatherThe Origin Of My Pain
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Have you ever read "Daddy" by Sylvia Plath? Her father died when she was ten, and the man she married, Ted Hughes, reminded her of her father (in a good way, she fondly remembered her father). Then Ted went out and had numerous affaris with other women, and abandoned Sylvia to raise two children on her own. "Daddy" is the result of that. It's one of my favorites, you would probably adore it. You should definitely study it and try using some of the techniques Sylvia Plath used in writing poems about your father, like how she described the little details about him that give away what she remembers of him.
Kitty-Kat4life chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
i love that! i just had to review even though yu've allready read it to me, i feel so bad yu lost yur dad and if it was mine, i would have killed myslef, you're a stronger person thn yu nkow hun, all yu have to do is look at yurself better
vturnip chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
What a brave and touching poem. Thanks for opening up and sharing your words and emotions.
freeyourself chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
that was a good poem, i guess thats kinda like me, well... maybe not... cuz people think im sad cuz my normal face isnt a happy face i guess, but whatever, good poem
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I am so sorry about your loss. :(

This is a beautiful poem and I hope you are able to move on and remember him in a way that is good for you, without making you upset soon.

Please keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
aw very sad poem... the rhyming is good too!
Thanks for all your reviews!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
aw! so sad! :'( u can tell u reely cared bout ur dad. lovely poem keep em comin!
Kat Mitroi chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Y'know what? I tihnk I'm crying... That was really touching. The rhyming makes it so beautiful, and... Well... I just really like it.
gwuinivyre chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
aw, once agian that is sad. But its good. your exellent at rhyming. Good job.