Reviews for Lost Perfection
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
cool! you're right I like it!
review me if you're free!
summerdazed
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Hey chica! Rock on! This is brilliant! I love the..the confidence you have and the strenght with which you say all that! I adore it! Lol, it's brilliant, truly. Love, Mia
emilyclaire chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Very cool and also a little sad.
nefaria18 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I don't care if Amanda says the one line is cliché. Since when does she know what she's talking about. This is executed so wonderfully and I love how you're beginning to not be afraid of things that aren't entirely logical or plot oriented. The more abstract the better! (as I like to believe) anyway. im not really good at giving reviews right now but you heard what I said at the meeting lol i think its great and stuff!
Wereowl-of-Darb chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
damn men...gr. Very good. i like the little jokes you slipped in. great job.
Anthony Draconius chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
What perfection you truly are Seras (As your boyfriend, I would know). To all of your ex's, you are lost but not to me. I love the way you put this poem together. Honestly I hoped that you would eventually write something like this.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Beautiful! :D It really is, and I am lucky that I happened to click on the "Just In" link when you had this piece up, or else I might not have noticed it! (I suck like that).

You are a brilliant writer, though. :) Please, don't ever stop!

Namir Swiftpaw
Broken Waiting Angel chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
ah ha! it's so true. it's their loss, not ours. good job! _
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
wow.. I liek it a lot.. it flows really well.. nice format too!