Reviews for In a Still Night
Oddrie chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
I don't think you realize that it's almost impossible to read this chapter. It's one big blog of black letters. Gosh, I don't want to sound like an elementary school writing teacher but, where are your paragraphs?
Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Fix the format, please! It sounds like a wonderful story, but lack of absolutely any paragraphs is so confusing.
critic chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
i havent read this story based just on the fact that there are no paragraphs. one big clump is just mean to the readers.
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
Oh boy...I can't read ANYTHING that long that is squished into a single paragraph. .
Firedew chapter 1 . 3/22/2001
That was a great story! Keep writing! :)
Amara Iceheart chapter 1 . 7/31/2000
ohhh! is there more? there's better be or I'm gonna be mad!
Marissa chapter 1 . 6/11/2000
I'd love to read it, it sounds very interesting, but I'd appreciate it if you could work on the formatting first.
Articuno chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Really good story! Kudos to you. Though, are you going to continue it? I'd like to know more about Glare, and they both seem to be interesting characters. Great job!