Reviews for Seeing through Shadow
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
nicely put!
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Powerful and moving. The message you wanted me to see is clearly protrayed here. The metaphors you use are extremily brilliant and intense. Thanks for being patient with me in my dark times.
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Another great one! My fave line: "A thousand shades of gray drift silently to the ground," So very well put! Great job! :)
Cari-anne chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
This is a very good poem, I usually only see the darkness but I think I'll borrow your eyes for a while if you don't mind and focus on the light. You're and inspiration
rainbowskye chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Nice poem, I like your viewpoint on life...I think you have the good point with the shades of grey and how somebody can decide if they want to focus on the light or the dark...plus I thought that the use of rhyme was good (I'm a fan of rhyme and punctuation in poetry and this has both plus a nice message in it so...it's all good *smiles*)