Reviews for TuRmOiL
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Move over Robert Frost! Seriously Matt, you could become the next world reowned poet. You're just that good, and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks that.
Hawke
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
just one question, why is the title written like that?
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Wow, this has to be one of my faves of your poems so far. *adds to faves* I absolutley loved this one! I've got so many fave lines that I won't bother mentioning them all. Great job (again)!
Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
The first three lines are *absolute genius*, though with "It's maw gapes open and it roars with unbridled intensity," and the repetition of "scream" in lines 9 and 11, you seem to have admitted a taint of cliche. The ending is strong nonetheless (though not as strong as the beginning), and this is a nicely-crafted poem overall.
Cari-anne chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Very descriptive, you really showed your talent here. Excellent job