Reviews for TuRmOiL
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Move over Robert Frost! Seriously Matt, you could become the next world reowned poet. You're just that good, and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks that.
~Hawke
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
just one question, why is the title written like that?
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Wow, this has to be one of my faves of your poems so far. *adds to faves* I absolutley loved this one! I've got so many fave lines that I won't bother mentioning them all. Great job (again)!
Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
The first three lines are *absolute genius*, though with "It's maw gapes open and it roars with unbridled intensity," and the repetition of "scream" in lines 9 and 11, you seem to have admitted a taint of cliche. The ending is strong nonetheless (though not as strong as the beginning), and this is a nicely-crafted poem overall.
Cari-anne chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Very descriptive, you really showed your talent here. Excellent job