Reviews for Time Has Run Out
Queen of the Dragons chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
*shivers* oh... that was kinda creepy. As I read it, I felt as though a ghost was passing through me. *shivers again*
DeadRaven69 chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
i think adding the love part into the poem was a very nice touch. good job. i see dispair, its pretty. This poem makes me want to go up to the love of my life and hug them and never let go... unfortunately i do not have a love of my life, so that plan would fail, lol
Ryan Patrick Bailey chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Great anaphoras! This is a very insightful poem! Keep up the good work, my friend and keep writing! I will check back for more soon, see ya later!