Reviews for The Prophecy of the Sun
The Intelligent Designer chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Sorry, but I couldn't resist.

Haikus are a very strict form of poetry involving nature, so this is not a message, nice tone, nice rythm, nice poem.
The Paperback Mummy chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Ah, scary. The idea of WWI. I really like how you did this, with it rising in the east, setting in the west. Good stuff!
Jimmy Jazz chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Ah, very clever. Great idea, and you wrote it superbly, well done.
Tetris Queen chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
i know from experience that i should not get on the suns bad side for it is as treacherous as war itself, and as common on this earth. all hail the sun! HAIL!