Reviews for Upon the Wind
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
very interesting...
Alia G. L chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Really good. I like it.
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Hawke here.
Matt, no matter how many times I read this, I tear up. It's a really beautiful poem. Thank you so much for writing it for me. I love how you expressed your feelings. Thanks again.
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
The imagery is vivid and unique; this is refreshing. Great job. My only critique is that sometimes the rhythm seems a bit off; in my experience, the best way to get a feel for the rhythm of rhymed poetry is to try writing a few sonnets. The syllabic count is predetermined, so it literally *has* to flow well. This is already good, but once you get the hang of that, your poetry will be worlds better.
lyv
Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
I like your new, formal feel. Some of the images here are quite beatiful, and the you've made the concrete imagery mesh well with the abstractions.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
ahh...so beautiful - it goes into my fav. list! Btw, Hawke is such a cool name! :O) Hey thanks for the reviews, I'll review you again, ok? have to run now, _
summerdazed