Reviews for Waiting to Explode |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i liek teh alternate line thing... great job... i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() They say that first impressions are the most important. good for you then! I read tons of poems, but I have to honestly say there was something about yours that blew me away. It flowed so well, and I loved the style, the rhyming, and description. Seriously... blew me away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so good! And very emotional! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey thanks for the review. I loved this poem especially the line that says "Pain becomes the addiction" i related alot to it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is good. Your poem "Green eyes" has inspired me to write a poem about green eyes! :) I just wanted to thank you once again for writing it! :) -Anna. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome poem! it is so incredible! i love the last two lines a lot, but i think my fave line is "Hopelessly wishing on a starless sky"...that just paints such a beautiful image in my mind! great poem- keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good, i dont think there's a person out there that can't relate to this at least a littel bit. nice job, adn thanks for the review |