Reviews for Darkness at Dawn |
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![]() ![]() this story is absolutely unique. it has a very original plot. initially, it reminded me of sleeping beauty because of the curse and i was very confused because the vague explanations for things but towards the end, the revelation was simply amazing because everything made sense it was so unexpected ! this story is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am definitely hooked on this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very excited about this story. I love the way you write. I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Ps, that's wake me up when September ends, not boulevard of broken dreams hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's finished! For a moment there, I thought it would been Brenton and Nikki! XD Punk-rocker? That part stunned me. LOL. But yay. I'm gonna assume that's Zander in the last part! Uh, I'm not sure if I'm just the dimmest bulb on the tree or anything, but the stuffs weren't that clear to me - I'm still kind of confused as to how they can communicate with each other without speaking and how they can look into their own past lives. And it was, well, kinda fast. The falling in love part. Though, I suppose, it could be attributed to Tommy loving her in their past lives. The ending up together was a lil abrupt, too. But overall this was fairly enjoyable, and I'd love to read any future stories you night want to come up with, so I'm putting you on Author Alert. ;D And the POV switch was fine. The problem is that I haven't decided on the main pairing for Happiness, or if there should even be a main pairing at all. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wahhh. So there was no curse. And all that stuff - is from her past life? Ma gawd. (: It's still a little messy, but okay, I somewhat understand. Are they like psychics? -ML. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're together...? And Lolololol, that gay part was totally unexpected. XD -ML. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it got more and more mysterious, that's for sure :/ Moving on! -ML |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was helluva cruel. God, if I were Zander I would have slapped her or something. Cough. -ML. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Deep, but a tad too deep; I don't quite get it. Why are they acting so enigmatic? -ML |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's so suggestive and possessive, he's sexy. ;D I looooooove when he gets jealous of his Dad. :DD -ML |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Nikki likes Cerise? Well, good for her 'cause I don't. Nikki and Zander seem to be able to communicate via telepathy or something. ._. Just something interesting to note. XD Ew. Brenton was such a jerk about it! I mean, dude, you don't have to announce your friend's ex-crush on you to your frigging son who has the hots for her and who also looks exactly like you! -ML |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what Nikki said to her. ._. Lolzxc. :D What's with Zander's enthusiasm towards swimming? And this suspense about the curse is KILLING MEH. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trololol! They held hands~ And Cerise, sorry. Huh, an old cell phone. LOL. -ML. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is that curse something to make Brenton's son fall in love with her or somethin'? And zomg she gave that frigging necklace to him. -_- Wow. I thought she'd throw it away or something, 'cause she was so freaked out earlier. :D -ML |