|Reviews for What is it That I want to say to you?|
| michelle the reader chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Hey I don’t know what made me read this, but it was very well written, I enjoyed it a lot.
you really captured the hurt and sorrow of losing a friend, I read it as if hurting someone a little closer then a mate, more like a lover, but either way right, it still hurts thinking that you made the person in your life upset by something you had said or done, or not said or done. I can feel what you were writing about; it touched my heart, thank you very much for posting it and giving me the chance to read it.
You kind of made me think too I should put all my photos somewhere safe and nice to keep the memories packed away safely like they are in my mind. Anyway good job, I’ve enjoyed reading your other stories too, you sure do have a knack for writing
| hypocrite extrodinare chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
wow... a little confusing... but wow...
| jewel of the nile7 chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
My dearest sister
this piece is georgous,
really thought provoking..
what makes it so special
is that it's very convincing.
keep up the good work!
jewel of the nile7
| miss-peake chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
that was so beautiful it almost made me cry especially the poignant line at the end of the poem. Absolutely fantastic the way all the emotions feel so real just from reading it