Reviews for Dying
Akai Yami no Naka chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
Your poems seem really immature and clich├ęd. You need to respect yourself more than that, sister - you're a person, an individual, with your own mannerisms and ideas. You're not just another number, so don't write like it; once again, you really need to respect yourself more than that.
E.m.p.t.y.H.o.r.i.z.o.n chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Emotional. Reminds me of "Control It" by Static X
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Wow. I've never seen a poem quite like this before! Write on!