Reviews for Possessiveness
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
ow. powerful.
marabelle chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
yes, that is an extreme: very well written, "much strain" awkward
mais bien fait
sarah
(p.s feel free to take a look at my stuff anytime)
Leo chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I love this I actually would do the same thing if she ever got hurt I told her if she ever dated somebody else i would wish her the best but when they hurt her I'd take em down! Good poem I like being able to relate with stuff like this!
Destiny's Canvas chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
My best friend felt like this towards the one who broke my heart. If I didn't care about him so much she would have done it all and more
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
i can relate to this, even though some parts of the poem are very... um... strong... i'm generally a rather naive person... so i wouldn't go to the extreme of KILLING anybody but i WILL be very angry... thank you for sharing and please continue writing and publishing!
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
such a very strong piece. again, i can totally relate. good work!