Reviews for Respect Me
g21lto chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Very nice. I think everyone can relate to this.
Hannah Jae chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Well I shall go for honesty here, I do not think that is your best work. The titles says and calls for a strong message, but your poem shows weakness. I suggest rewording it so the poem is stronger. This could be a great poem, if the right timing scheme and words were used.
Claudio Sanchez chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
One might hope that this is a true story. Otherwise, it does not convey a message or make me think or do anything except marvel at, what i personally think, is substandard poetry. Perhaps you should try and revise it so each word is made for more power so it makes one feel something