|Reviews for Demon Dreaming|
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
wow, defiantly original. i've never read anything like it before, but you have tons of describtion (why can i NEVER spell that word?) and imagery. one suggestion for you though: the last line say 'and then i wake up' i think you should change it to: and then i wake.' -shrug- merely a suggestion. oh and thank you for your reviews and critizm. yes...
| grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
Artistic with unique vision (even if it's a nightmare). I like the positioning of the sentence "I can't keep up with myself".
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
You have such detailed, elaborate dreams that make unbelivable poetry. I love these lines and the way you structured them.
"I can't keep,
It's as though you're panting and out of breath as you try to keep up with yourself.
| Ryan Patrick Bailey chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
I really like the way that you have structured this poem, Matt. Great work. I also enjoyed the last three/four stanzas with the constant flow. I think the final line was the coolest *G*. Keep it up and write on!
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
*applauds* Very good! Keep up the awesome work! :)
| A Girl in Denial chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
Wow, that's quite a poem. More like a nightmare! Once again, a fabulous poem.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
ah dreams... i like dreams. sometimes. nice dream :P
i hope youre not one who plans on uploading 7 to 30 a day like u know who... and i mean daily for a long period of time. if so, pls tell me so i can take u off of author alerts for now ;) if ur not gonna do that and u can keep to 5 or under then its all good ;) !
yup yup :D nice nice writing!