Reviews for The Accidental Muse
goingsogagaoveryou chapter 25 . 5/28/2012
I love it i love it i love it! Ahhhh any word cant even describe how beautiful it is. Insanely beautiful! Thank you for sharing it! Lovelovelove
goingsogagaoveryou chapter 24 . 5/28/2012
Oh eeeeemmmm that speech! Omg so beatiful! Just WOW. It even made me cry. Wow :)
Eripaul chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
Actually, I worked quite successfully as a bartender for ten years, also speak and read some Spanish, totally understand your point, though. However, as correct and as annoyed as you are, you should be aware that over the years, the drink's name evolved from a literal spelling/translation to a more pop culture 'kubalibra kinda thing'. I do appreciate the feedback, though! Once again, I appreciate the feedback, though:)
effection chapter 7 . 12/16/2007
Your "kubalibra" should actually be a "Cuba Libre" and when ordering a drink, really should just be "rum and coke". I don't know if you ever bartended, but I personally find it really irritating when people order cuba libre's when they can just ask for a rum and coke.
effection chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Ah! - okay, I usually leave reviews at the very end of the story, but I saw you mention 'Boiler Room' and had to comment. I've never seen it myself, but my uncle's wife's brother has one speaking line in it! I've been planning to rent it just to see him in it, but never got around to it.
Kadekksys chapter 25 . 7/6/2007
aww... i LOVE this story! I think I'm gonna print up copies of Ben's acceptance speech and send them to all my "Broads" cause I know it'll melt all of their hearts- it sure did mine! Wow, I just cant stop gushing about how much I love this story! i dont think I've ever read a story all in one sitting til now- you should feel honored; I pulled an all-nighter to read it! haha! anyways, thanks for providing me with a really great three hours! I love this story so much! Kay, I'm done now. I swear!
Kadekksys chapter 19 . 7/6/2007
OHMIGOSH! I'm bawlin my freakin eyes out right now and I know how it ends cause I accidentally read the last chapter! Dang, you're good. AH! This sucks.
Kadekksys chapter 5 . 7/4/2007
OHMIGOSH! This story has given me a new pair of abs cause I'm laughing so hard. I was gonna wait til I was further along to review, but this chapter was just too much! I love your story!
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic chapter 25 . 6/30/2007
breathtakingly awesome!

faulous story

AJS chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Btw, just wondering, why is it accidental muse? Because wasn't it not... accidental? :x I don't know haha. Just a thought :) Keep up the good work! I added this to my favorite stories list :D

- Alyssa
AJS chapter 25 . 4/15/2007
Oh man I LOVE this. So much. This story is amazingg. I actually wanted to comment last night when I had finished but I was too tired and I actually I'm supposed to be studying like crazy for my APUSH test. Yikes. Anyways, yeah. This story and the characters in it are amazing. For some reason, I can't get that visual out of my head of Ben stretching out in his backyard with his size 13 reeboks and spreading out his hands. HAHAHA. That was cute and hilarious :D But goddamn this story was freaking hott too. ANd I don't know. I'm kind of at a loss of words to say except that I love this story a lot. The emotions seem so real and just... yeah. It was tearing me up to see Ben & Anne's relationship crumble apart :( And so sososososos cute to see him all mushy hahaha :D I was like squealing inside. I was freaking yelling at Ben though because he didn't even bother to get any confirmation or whatever that those records were valid he just... accepted it. At least Anne got some confirmation.

I liked how whenever they met each other, it was like they were just instantely made up and forgiven. Like... there didn't need to be pleads or anything to make the other person understand it was just... instantly forgiven. I love you so much that I can't do anything but forgive you.

I love this :) And I think you might have had a better reply from me if I really didn't need to go and study for that APUSH test :x But you're an awesome writer and I love your work! :D Keep it up and I hope you write more amazing stories like this in the future! I realy miss Ben & Anne already :( I liked it when he called her Annabelle, haha. I like that name :) Size 13 reeboks. Oh man. I have this newfound love for reeboks. I have no idea why :D

Ben is freaking hot. Anne & Ben are so delightfully delicious together :D

- Alyssa
AJS chapter 5 . 4/14/2007
I'm not done, and I usually don't just randomly comment on this chapter and that while reading but I'm about to take a break now cuz it's 5am and I should probably head to bed and I don't want to forget this but... this chapter was AMAZING. I love how you had her say that little speech about love and stuff... which in itself was pretty damn deep and profound and REAL... and then at the very end you tied it back. Wow. Just wow. Haha. I'm in awe I love this a lot a lot a lot :D I know there's no such thing as magic but that was pretty much as close as you can get to magical, if you ask me :)

I'm loving this (McDonalds!) I'll be back with a better reply once I'm done reading :)

- Alyssa
boredshitless chapter 25 . 9/15/2006
i agree with everyone else whose read this story...this is easily the best fp romance fic i have ever read. congratulations and thankyou for writing a story where i think is a great success. i look forward to reading any more future stories that you intend to write
A.C chapter 25 . 6/27/2006
I know I should have gone to be and get some rest before finals, but who could when they came upon this story. Read it all in one block and I loved it. Loved the plot and especially the characters. Maybe you'll add to it or maybe not, I really liked the ending though. And as others have said it is very much worthy of print. I would buy it in a heartbeat. Thank you for one of the best stories I've ever read.
me chapter 22 . 6/8/2006
i love that you named the sexy and really smart lawyer alan. it makes me think of alan shore from boston legal, the sexiest damn lawyer in existence.
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