Reviews for My Loves Heart
x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
So sweet so sweet yup yup _
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 5/18/2004
i like the 2nd poem better than the first, but i find them both cute.
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
*laughs* Oh this is great... such humor. I'm impressed. I do have a sense of humor (I swear!) I can just never seem to write a humerous piece... but oh man, have you written one. This is great... I don't know what else to say, except that it made me laugh. Especially that last line, even if your poetry is not appalling. :P
dawningfear chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
This is wonderful! The second stanza and the last are my favourites. What is the style called... It's when you use metaphors, similes and/or imagery far out of expected context. I never imagined telling someone they smell like fired breakfast could be viewed as so complimentary! Awesome stuff; of your work, this is one of my favourites.
lisaslife chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
i love it, its sweet and funny
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Again, excellent, excellent imagery.
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
LOL very humourous! So sweet too. Did Nic read this? I'm sure she would've protested! Still bloody *this time I meant to say blood* amazing! Nice connections there, especially with the school bus, didn't see that one coming! Take care, great job, and good luck!