|Reviews for Provocation|
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
simplistic style and word choice- but you portray it perfectly.
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
I love your style and how I can relate to this piece. This is one of your best and you really are one of my favorites on fictionpress :D
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
i love this though! its like tempting the person to find something wrong with you. hehehe i like that! i can see so many ppl in my life that pick me apart like that. so addign to favs!
| lisaslife chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
good description, i love the one word lines the emphasize the rest of the poem.
\ Faithfully a fan,
| Sterces chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
O! I can relate to this one. I like it. Your style is interesting, but I love it. You have talent! WRITE ON!
| EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
How we can all strive for perfection in someway and at times we forget to be just plain good in some things that it becomes our undoing and therefore our weak point in character. This was a very well written peace and I have to say I had to read it twice to get the initial meaning in the last lines after Perfect, and I took a look at the reviews to help me out but it's still great. Very marveously written. Seems that Easter Break did your writing skills marvelously! Everything seems to have so much depth to them now! AMAZING! Take care, great job, and good luck!
| finding sanity chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
i love this. i can relate to it which makes it even more great.
r/r sum of my stuff if you have time