Reviews for Metal Melody
EWindheim chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
OK...i can't even begin to think of a word to describe how totally spectacular this is. Definately on my top ten favorites of all the poems I've read by you. *kiss* Keep it up, novio.
Darkabyss2462 chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Seems more poemish than songish. Can't envision hearing this on radio, can see it in a book or read somewhere...good poem though.
HiddenFlame42 chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Not bothered to sign in...this was pretty good...a little different than your normal style, but it's good to use different styles every now and then...Hm...thinking back, this would probably make a good song actually...*nods*
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
its cute, sweet n short
A Girl in Denial chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
This is very nice content. If I can make a small suggestion - you don't need a comma at the end of each line. Yes, they're nice to have once in a while, but you don't really need them everywhere. Just thought I'd put that up in the air. Take it or leave it.