|Reviews for domesticated|
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Definitely, definitely know what you mean.
Wish this were just a bit longer...but as is, it's quite effective. Maybe you shouldn't mess with something, once it's right.
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
very good haiku! Pretty much perfect!
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Not sure I really understand the meaning. But even so, it certainly lets the reader know you can't stand being inside.