|Reviews for Endless Pain|
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Well, hello again. a few things: isn't it sore? not soar? don't over do the rhyming now some typos, which i think u'll figure out when u read it over a couple of lines in there seemed odd, or at least in my opinion, or maybe u don't need my opinion? meh, i'm paranoid
Was it a fight with a good friend? these things happen, but then, who really knows how did he betray you exactly? clarify on that point, makes the reader more interested in the situation.
Never the same