Reviews for Mirrabooka
windywaters17 chapter 11 . 7/20/2010
out of all the stories (albeit incomplete) this story was my favorite to read. I truly wish that, even unlikely, you will consider finishing this story. i can see the beauty that has been happening within these words. you have woven an honest romance between two unlikely characters and it is magical. your story is one of my favorites and the it has the potential to be great. my only wish is for you to complete this one beautiful story.
MelodieCC chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
Chloe seems like a very interesting person. a bit different from what i imagined but interesting nonetheless. :)
MelodieCC chapter 11 . 5/10/2010
this is too cute! you should really continue. :)
MelodieCC chapter 9 . 5/10/2010
Jesse is so cute! nice country-boy, charming. :)
MelodieCC chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
interesting so far. this story is different from the many that i've read on this site. anyways, i'll just keep reading... :)
Megan-TheWriter chapter 11 . 2/10/2007
I like this. It's cute. And pretty hilarious too.

One thing that bugged me was some of the dialogue though...It's crowded together sometimes. You'll start a paragraph with one person speaking and finish it with another person speaking and it gets confusing as to who's saying what sometimes. Other than that, no real critisisms. I quite like it :) Write more soon?

frackandbonechick chapter 1 . 12/27/2006

Hey Gurl, i'm from the good old NZ and reading this chapter was hilarious, i understood all of the lingo, and i even have their accents in my head (or what i would think they would sound like, my partner is australian so i'm kinda using his voice

I'm loving it so far, ok so now i'm off to read the rest


tashd chapter 11 . 12/6/2006
plez update soon! i really enjoy reading ur stories... feel free 2 update ur otha stories as well...
Fay chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
Good chapter and a good introduction to Chole. Your dialogue is sharp and witty and you seem to have created a character we can like for being sassy and down to earth instead of a Julia Roberts in Notting Hill character who was a bit insipid and spoilt if we're been truthful! I hope Chole lives up to expectations!
Fay chapter 2 . 12/4/2006
You're back! I used to read your stories when I was at sixth form a couple of years ago and I loved them all. Now I'm all grown up, married and work in accounts but today I was bored and decided to have a look into the past and it turns out you're still going strong! This was a story you hadn't worked on much back then but I have to say I'm only two chapters in and it looks like it will shape up nicely. Keep it up if you can, you're a very talented writer!
Emma chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
I'm Australian, and I think I'm utterly pathetic. I didn't even know what half of the Aussie slang meant. Darn, it really shows that I'm a city girl.

I loved the fic though; I can't wait to read the other chapters you have posted.
MCM315 chapter 11 . 10/25/2006
Yes! You're back! I'm glad things are calming down somewhat. I know what college (uni) can entail, and it's a lot of work and not much downtime. I really missed your stories, though. I was thrilled to see you'd updated this one especially.

Great job on the sheep shearing descriptions. I could actually picture what was going on. You put a lot of work into this chapter, and it showed. And I especially love a shirtless, sweaty Jesse. And so does Chloe. They are so different, it will be very interesting to see how Jesse reacts if Chloe starts to pursue him.

I'm really excited you're back, and I can't wait for an update of RJ Revisited! You have to keep writing, you're too good not to do it!
Caitlin chapter 11 . 10/24/2006
my god.. this story keeps getting sweeter and sweeter!

good luck with your exams! I have my finals this week! yay...

lol, keep writing!

Caitlin chapter 11 . 10/24/2006
omg, tee hee hee! this so cute! I love the characters, and the way you write about them, bringing in different parts of their personalities seperately, so the reader isn't overloaded. I love the attraction, and the way it develops in a very realistic way. I can see all of this happeneing. And, I must say I think Jesse sounds (DROOP DEAD GORGEOUS!) adorable. He seems like a real swetheart. Update soon, please!
Vi c Pope chapter 11 . 10/23/2006
Hey! i've been reading all our ur stories for ages and have been waiting for you to update! man is embarassing how addicted to this sight I am... anyway, nice chapter! An im definately looking forward to the next cahpter fo romeo and juliet revisited as that has got to be my fave, that or savannah... anyways update soon deary!
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