LoL, this one's very different from your other stories... i don't think you've ever written a male virgin. haha. anyways, this sounds funny. i'm just heading off to read more... i might not get through it all right now bt i'll finish today. promise.

Talk about exfoaliant. I have only every used solvol to wash paint, and stuff off my hands! I can't even imagine washing my body with it.

the location is final! ur not mentioning chloe's name on purpose. lol..suspense. but the script that they gave to jess..wouldnt it have the actors/actresses names on the front or somehwere? im curious about that part. so...when are they finally going to arrive? the whole movie people..maye next chapter? haha... update sooN!

This is getting interesting...
I look forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work (and fast updates!)

This story is going to be bloody brilliant, i think/hope. not that it isnt already, but the real fun'll start when she arrives, of course.

Cool start. I can't wait until Jesse and chole meet. That'll be amusing.
Good update on Savanah also.
Night Lily

Ooh, I like Chloe! She's fun! That whole Keith Hedger thing is hilarious to me! hehe! I can't wait until she gets to Jesse. This story is awesome!

Hahaha, I like the Keith Hedger and Hugh Blackman thing. Of course the location is gonna be Jesse's station, right? ) More please!

hehe...so its FINAL! yay..and we finally get a glimpse at the famous chloe. smokes like a chimney? drinks like a fish? lol. laughing compariesion. i've heard about the chimney one before but never the fish one. lol. its building up. please udpate soON!

Fun - I like Chloe. Good to see the UK didn't knock all the Aussie out of her. Now I wonder who'll she'll fall in love with when she gets to Australia...

Wow, Chloe sounds like a feisty one. lol. I can't wait to see her on the farm. I just have to say that you develop your characters wonderfully. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Thanks for the dedication. I feel loved again. It's a blatant attempt to get me to keep reviewing your stuff, I know :P But I like this one, so its ok. It's grounded in a strange sort of reality, despite the fact that a movie star's gonna turn up, so its kinda cool. Screw your English assignment, keep writing!

hm...the plot thickens...drought, probable loss of station...nice buildup

Well done. I like the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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I like it! please continue!
~*Much Love*~