Reviews for The Scarred Ones chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I really like your idea for this story it's very interesting and you have done alot of character developement which is good but just a some constructive criticisms the story is fifty chapters in but nothing has really happened yes the five gardians have been found but nothing beyond that just alot of character developement which like I said is good but I feel like more should have happened by now but that's just my opion and it's your story so what happens and when is up to you, but I do hope you will continue with this story because I would like to see where the story is going.
Alias Blue chapter 55 . 9/12/2009
Aaw. Poor Emily, and cute Roman calling her. For some reason Emily is my least favourite character, but then the girls always are, so it's nothing personal to Emily- the boys just seem more interesting maybe.

And I love this line:

'her heart pounding like an insane hamster trying to headbutt its way out of her chest.' Ha ha.
Alias Blue chapter 54 . 4/2/2009
I really like this insight into Roman. I like how he's getting attached to people because he seemed so lonely before. :-( Go Roman!
Casey Drake chapter 54 . 4/1/2009
Roman has always been a very interesting character to me, but I think this is my favorite Roman chapter.

:) CD
Zakemaster chapter 9 . 3/31/2009
I don't have enough free time to keep reading, but I find the story very entertaining. The characters are all very distinct and interesting, and I can almost imagine running into them in real life. Almost. These first eight chapters have been very entertaining, and I really love the attention to detail that you provide for your readers. It makes it quite a bit easier, and, because you haven't been overpowering it, helps us readers get into the story. I really do intend to read more later. Very good. I'm interested in seeing where this story is going.
Mayaj chapter 54 . 3/31/2009
Gah. Gorgeous. Seriously. Possibly best insight into a character I've ever read. Gah. Wow. Roman..!
Mayaj chapter 53 . 12/6/2008
Gah, poor Van...! So good at hurting himself... But YAY Van and Christian time!
Shayna Davis chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Is this like a show or something because eveyone's saying how someone is so hot is this a fanfic?
Casey Drake chapter 53 . 12/6/2008
It continually shocks me when I try to compare Cayn's Van with Christian's Van (for lack of a way to differentiate them in my head)... but I like both of them.

:) CD
Alias Blue chapter 52 . 11/6/2008
Yay! Love Van and Dice. They're so great. And poor Roman. Can't wait for more.
Mayaj chapter 52 . 10/25/2008
Gah did I NEED THIS. Double dose of Van and Dice. Van is so cool~ and not. :D Poor Dice...!
Casey Drake chapter 52 . 10/23/2008

-blink- format of review is different. ANYway, that was awesome. Van and Dice play off each other so well...

Casey Drake chapter 51 . 10/5/2008
Aww... I never guessed that would happen but it rather makes sense. I love it! Ee Roman being cute.

Mayaj chapter 51 . 10/5/2008
Oy oyoyoyoyoy Oscar...! Roman...! ABBOTS!
Mayaj chapter 50 . 10/5/2008
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