|Reviews for Cherry Lips|
| ItMustBeLove chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I like the rhyming scheme, and the wording was good. It reminds me of the song Cherry Lips (by Garbage), but that song is like the other side of the coin in this case. Very well done, a little cryptic, but fantastic none the less.
| CutToHeal chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
I am loving it. I've felt that before and its hard to express done.
| Cymoril Avalon chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
Every stanza flows like its own poem, but as a whole, they don't flow together. The beat is inconsistent, but your wording is beautiful. I adored the reference to penguin's tears.
| Nerf chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
i reli like this, its vry different from ur other stuf, and kinda more cryptic, probably isnt ment to b tho.
i'll end d rambol on hey great poem :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
i like hte rhyming... and i liek it... altho i cant relate.. the last stanza is the best
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Pretty cool. It seemed a little forced at times, a little off beat like with the penguins and stuff like that, but it just made it different. Excellent flow though, and I loved the ending. :) Great work!
| Jitterrue chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
I've never seen a kiss depicted like such a fresh cool glass of water. haha.
| twiggygurlusa chapter 1 . 4/18/2004