Reviews for Affections
the lorax is coming chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
i know the feeling
nesy chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Very good! I think that too sometimes...
Always Writing chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Hey, MP (or is it OP?)
It's good. The rhyming isn't forced and the poem flows well.
I love the ending...great job.
-Carrie (Herms)
JohnnyGodfather chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Your entry is a marvalous Masterpiece of masterful mastery.
If I could choose between having all the wonders of the world suddenly reavealed before my eyes, and reading one sentence of this entry, I would hesitate, and then choose this entry.
Your work is beautiful, and gives reason for the light to shine if only to see it.
To celebrate this entry, I will be fasting throughout monday and most of tuesday.
R&R my entries! Peace!