Reviews for wandering
firefairy27 chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
i like wandering... i like be outside mostly but... anyways, if you need constructive help, try asking uh... oh, slave to the voices, he's pretty good.
Fargalas chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I'm no expert on poetry, but this is a very flowy experience. Interesting structure, and it tells not just a story but a feeling of loss. I commend you TwyliteRose, and you are now on my favorite authors list! I don't write poetry, but I would like it if you reviewed some of my work. There's nothing up yet, but it'll be in the Sci-Fi section if you're interested.
kazfuego chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
nice... well written, to be exact. hope you continue posting poetry!
-kaz
TwyliteRose chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
please review this, thanx