brilliant! that was cool, by the way can you plz R&R my story?

Wow! This is awesome! You are so talented!

Again, great poem, I like the style and tone. Definately following one of the best poets in history. I love your writing, you're now one of my faves... aren't you special? YESH!
~Echo

wow! I love it. This might have been better in the poetry section, but oh well! you know best.
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I like the rhyme scheme. It seems natural. Good job!
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The length is great too. Oo I can never write anything that long.
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You have quite a way with words! Good work. If you ever have time, you could look at some of my work, but don't feel obligated. .

It's more of a poem than fiction. Its really nice. It is kinda cool... It's wonderful! I like it. It's a neat style.
(You have permission to look at my stuff, if you want... _) I'm weird...
Okay, maybe a little corny, but still really well written. Nice and wonderful job!

i forgot to put this in my summary:
sorry if some parts of it are sorta corny...:)
please reveiw this, thanx