Reviews for Battle of the Soul
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
What a struggle communicated! I can read the emotions that are rumbling between the lines. Well done.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Omg, I can seriously relate to this! It's so beautiful and your use of words are amazing. Well done! QueenVixta x
Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
I love the first half, but I think the second half could improve. I really like it though!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
sad, oh but good, sad though...
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
You have a very intelligent style. Something that's no angsty like a huge chunk is here...but not dumb the other've got a unique voice to you. I really like and admire that. Good work.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Your poetry is alwayds filled with feeling, I really enjoy reading it. You always ask a lot of questions in your pained poems. One line didn't seem to fit for me: "You leave me with no one to turn to and my outlets are thinning." The word "outlets" just didn't seem right. I would suggest "my soul is thinning" but that's just me. Take care now and keep writing.