Reviews for Clouds
Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Umm, it'd flow better if the 5th line went "I see your toment, your eyes clouded over with misery". But I love it! Keep writing, you're on my favorite author's list!
Lilly Leapfrog chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Good emotions.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
wow, interesting!
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I see your torment, your misery cloud your eyes
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I like the idea, when don't you have a good idea? But I would love to see what this poem would be like if you extended the imagery a little and helped us get to know this brown-eyed girl a little better. _