Reviews for Come Back
Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
I love it! Especially how the first and last lines are the shortest, it really enhances the effect of the poem.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
poems getting shorter :P till amazin tho!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
A flicker! I like the start to this poem. It grabs you right away.
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Not a huge fan of these shorter ones. But there are some that get their message across in a few lines and I respect and admire that because that is hard for me to do. The last 2 lines to me kinda just don't mesh as well as the rest of it. I dunno, the first time I read it I said Come back to reality Come back to life. And that stuck on me, so when I saw it wasn't that it just didn't have that flow to it. But, it does have a good meaning, good wording as usual. You are going on the favorites list now.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Cool poem. I enjoyed it, but I don't understand why some of your poems are in paragraph form and others are broken up into lines. I like the ones that are broken up into lines myself.
In any case I like how you've been through the Darkness and how you now beckon others to join you in the Light. Yay for you!