Reviews for Forgotten
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
metaphor (I think) of a toy is powerful and I love it. Heart wrenching poem. The image of a shelf and canyon being integrated is a powerful image.
method acting chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Wow. Beautiful. Consider me your fan. *adds to favouties list*
Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Oh how sad! It's wonderful because it really conveys the emotion, but still, it's sad!
hateselfhate chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
This is very true, when your sad, you can't see anything but your faults/yourself. Very artistic.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
thats truley amazing. wow!
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Interesting, I tried to do the forgotten toy idea as a whole poem but found it hard, though I have it there just to work on. I know heartbreak all too well. I like this, it is very good. Man I'm getting tired too early onight I've still got things to do and poems to read!
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Freaking awesome. Just freaking awesome. I love how you connected it to your other poem. Truly a combination of insight, talent, and a great idea. This is one of my favorite pieces.