|Reviews for Hidden Message|
| method acting chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Such a clever idea. Your work (what I've read so far)sounds to old. Ancient, untouched, and perfect. Amazing.
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Beautiful poem and imagery. Definetly you at your on, QueenVixta.
| Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Wow . . . this is like the way I feel about a lot of things. It makes me want to write a poem now.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
hehehe i love crazy stuff like this! rakking my brain trying to figure it out. ah nice nice girl!
| invalid id chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I like it Princess ;) It's very good, though not as vivid as your other works. I woulda loved to seen it longer(B/c I love longer poems, not a huge fan of short stuff) but this was good...even if I'm more a fire person than wind :P
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
An interesting poem. I like it, but it makes me long for some of the imagery of your other work ;\ where are the demons or stars or leaves Hawke? Where are they? :D I kid. It's fine. But in any case, I would love to see it spun out a little more and don't be afraid to add some more of that lovely vivid diction you have. :p
| hauntingtheliving chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
I like it alot..very nice job.