Reviews for Internal Struggle
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
wow, amazing! sorry my reviews are becoming but a bore... only so much you can say when amazing is what they all are
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Good poem, even got the rhyming thing going on. Very good diction and vocabulary, a mistress of words I do say.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Really an awesome ending to a dark poem. In a disconcerting way, it lets you into Hawke's world. A very sad and tormented place. That's it, the word that best describes this poem, and others dealing with the pain that Hawke feels. Torment. You convey your meaning very well. The imagery and diction is almost reminiscent of my works "InNeR DeMoNs" and "Darkness Feeds It." Well done.
Master Mind4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Masterpiece! Love the rhyme, wording, I just love this poem! You have great talent, thanx for sharing it... super-dee-duper poetry! Keep it going.
hauntingtheliving chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Wow.. I like it alot..really gets deep how I alot ofpeople feel, really.. keep up the nice work, really good job