Reviews for It's All Because of You
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
You are angry and really hurting. Speaks to pain and self destruction. Whew a poem to give a headache!
method acting chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
lovely ending. Beginging could have been stronger, but it was great. Very dark, filled with emotion. Lovely.
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Yes, could definitely see this as a rock song...I like it though! I think it's cool how you've got all the different emotions in your poems: love, anger, wondering, friendship (which I'm not sure you could technically call an emotion, but hey...). Mine all seem to be one long poem linked together. *shrug*Great job Hawke, keep it up!
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
WOWSERS. that's some change w/ the tone... it's so very interesting hrhr.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
*sniff* so sad!
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Oh! Very raw powerful, and emotional. My type of poem! Great job here!
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
It bothered me because it's a tad masochistic. And not in the good bad way, in the bad bad way. So naturally I was a little upset.
Review-wise, it's a raw, brutal poem that truly forces the reader to deal with the speakers pain. Very intense and very powerful. A very good, if unsettling piece.
Master Mind4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Very angry. Unique writing format. Very well written, an excellent piece of poetry. Great read, awesome write!