Reviews for Runaway
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
love the idea, and the format. and the last stanza.
Amara the Warrior chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
As I'm reading this I can feel the emotions someone must have been feeling when they ran away. This is amazing work.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
really enjoyed the way you put this. not your best piece, but I really can't judge.

!* noelle *!
VoiceOfTheSouth chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Nice write. I'm guessing its about a relationship gone bad? Anyway Runaway is a 'Runaway' Hit with me! But seriously this is a very nice poem. You used great words. The flow, and rythem is very good. It also had very good contrast. And the repetion of getting away or running away seemed to suit the poem. Well thank you for the review Peace & Love VoiceOfTheSouth
Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
interesting view into the whole 'im running away' thing. ok that didnt make sense, but it was a compliment. i like the repetition of the need to get away. nice job.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
i like this...these relationships are never good...but always hard to get out of...you really capture what ur trying to say here nicely done...i love this one so much. lots of love AllyCred
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
I really liked this one, you're a good writer. Keep it up. -pammy-
blackoutroses chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
i liked the contrast between emotions throughout-nicely worded.
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
awesome very powerful and effective im sure*Lady Solitaire
haunted moonlight chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
i think this is a very good poem. i really like the first few lines. good work!
Jitterrue chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
very nice perspective.