| Reviews for Tarpeia of Carthage |
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   Islandbreeze chapter 3 . 4/5/2005 Very nice start with these chapters here, you say you didn't portray their friendship well, but I think you showed it nicely. Good job- nice end to ch 3, write another chapter! |
| aims80 chapter 3 . 8/26/2004 I am looking forward to reading some more so keep up the good work. |
| kaika switched chapter 3 . 7/19/2004 Weird story. I think you write it very well, though. More description here or there would be nice, but still, a very good story as is. Keep writing! |
| BeyonceOutkast chapter 3 . 6/20/2004 Love the story. I never knew u had it in u girl. Keep up the good work. I want MORE! _; -B/O;P P.S. Cant wait 4 the party either! |
| Chione chapter 3 . 6/14/2004 You're not horrible at writing. In fact, you're probably one of the best eleven year old writer's I've read. The story could use a little more description, or characterization or something-sorry, my mind just went blank and I can't think of the word-but otherwise it's wonderful! Update soon! And yea. . .okay, I'm going now. . . . . |
| highliter chapter 3 . 6/12/2004 Luv the story hun! Itz off the hook n banging! Can't wait 4 more!UPDATE! -Tori McMellan aka TommyGirl |
| SweetLowe8 chapter 3 . 6/11/2004 Awesome story! -SL8) |
| summergirl63088 chapter 3 . 6/8/2004 This is a very good story. It's very interesting. Please update soon! |
| arwen-evenstar89 chapter 3 . 6/6/2004 I can't wait to read more! The only thing I noticed was that the story could be a little better if you were more decriptive about the settings and things! I STILL LOVE THIS STORY! |
| foolish Foxes chapter 3 . 5/31/2004 interesting moreness! |
| kelley1987 chapter 3 . 5/29/2004 Pretty good so far. I wonder who's the guy behind her? Hmm..very interesting. ;). Well, just wanted to return the favor and review back! :). Update soon! |
| LisaLisa chapter 3 . 5/28/2004 Beautifully done and thanks 4 reviewing my story! Yours is so much better! You can IM anytime on AIM and my sn is: xXHottieChickXx Thnx, c ya! |
| anatidaephobiac chapter 3 . 5/25/2004 ...Are you sure you're only 11? Are you like a supergenius or something? Your writing is awesome... The story is awesome... Are you serious 11? (can't comprehend this) If you write like this now, I can only imagine how you'll be when you get older... Update soon! |
| shyXshortieXbabe chapter 3 . 5/23/2004 no way! You're 11! how! well, i mean I know how. but how! Thats about 4 years younger than me and i really don't think i could've done better with this story. Very impressive. haha, my 11 year old brother wouldn't know what half of the words that you're using are. awesome work, keep it up. |
| Jackie-san chapter 3 . 5/23/2004 Awesome story! Can't wait 4 more otherwise I'll kill u! Whoopss...heheh that wasn't meant to come out... -Jackie Baby Blue- |