Reviews for One wish
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
sweet. and lovely.
i loved it.
Kanojo wa ore no Hikari chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
O sheez, I'm gonna cry now. That was beatiful. I can tell you really put yourself to it. This has to be the best poem I've ever read.
Destiny's Canvas chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
there are so many wishes I want to come true. But I won't give up. And no you shouldn't too.
Leo chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I actually do the same thing for K.C. On a shooting star ive wished the whole eyelash thing the first star out all kinds of that its stupid but I do it just for that small glimmer of hope!
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Aw! Very good poem...I'm not sure what else to say...
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
i liked this poem a lot! i feel like i'm always wishing for the same basic thing. i can totally relate. awesome job! and thanks for reviewing my poetry, i'm glad you liked it.
Kris 56 chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I love this poem. It's simply wonderful. I enjoy wishing and this poem perfectly captures that. And to wish for love? That's extremely sweet and totally beautiful. Good job... Kudos to you!