Reviews for Remember he's with her tonight
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
touching and sad.
wonderful tone.
oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
Love is a powerful feeling been around since before the earth was created. Heck, Love is the very reason man was created.
But it clear that love can be misused.
Geat Poem
Four thumbs up.
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
I really like this. I can sence how you really feel about this guy and the anger you have for the other girl.
... u stole my first name lol.
I really enjoy your writing.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Tha is so sad...and it is even sadder that so many people can relate. Well done.
Leo chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Thats so sad...:'( YOu are so good at this tapping into your emotions and knowing the emotions others feel great job!
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Oh that's so sad...of course it's always sad when the one you love love's another...
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
It's good because, to some extent, we've all been there. A common factor- that's what makes a piece people pleasing.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
aww, so sad! :'( but again, awesome writing. keep up the good work!
Jitterrue chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
ouch. that hurts. good use of repetition.