Reviews for The Pain
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
... are u always this miserable? ... write some happy stuff
Never the same
lalamushu chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
i like this poem. it speaks with a lot of pain and emotion. for some of the words, i can see what word you want to use, i just think that you're using the wrong one. or maybe i just don't really understand it; but it is pretty straightforward. "that stained mine mind deeply" i think you wanted to use "that stained my mind deeply". or you can use "that stained mine own mind deeply". i dunno. you're the artist here. thanks for reviewing my piece. sorry for the long review. _